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Friday, September 30, 2011

Review of Akiak

By Sylvia in Mr. Deaver's Class
Hey fourth graders! I'm doing a review about a story called Akiak. Akiak is a beautiful story about a dog that won't give up. Akiak is a 10 year old dog. She is an Alaskan Husky and is dark black with white spots. I really love this story because it taught me when the going gets tough, the tough get going. That is what this book is all about. Akiak's owner, Mick, had to drop off Akiak because her paw filled up with snow and her paw got sore. The reason I'm writing the review is because my class and I, from room 19, wanted to show how this story can teach us loyalty. Akiak is a beautiful dog. She is Mick's lead dog and she is old and she knows the tracks. Mick and Akiak both wanted to win. They were a little bit nervous but they were strong. That's the end of the review.

15 comments:

  1. thanks for all the comments about my review. ps stacy you spelt my name wrong sylvia mr.deavers class

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  2. Good job Sylvia! Way to be the first to do a review!! Mr. Deaver

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  3. Good job Sylvia! I like your review. ALOT Sylvia BY ISABEL CUELLAR

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  4. Sylvia you even spelled my name wrong.But it's okay.Because were FRIEND'S.Your the best.Stacey Mr.Deaver class

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  5. Great job SILVIA with the review BY LUPE FROM MR.DEAVER

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  6. great job on the Akiak Review SILVIA by Ricardo

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  7. mr.white is the best teacher from victor

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  8. Good Good Good Good Job YOU ROCK BY ISABEL

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  9. Mr.Dever is the best TEACHER EVER.THE BEST BY ISABEL

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  10. Good job sylvia you rock and your funny I no because Ibeen your friend whe we were in frist grade bi roy;]

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  11. silvey you did a great job you were the first one to get it done you are a good student in the classroom and you are smart Selena in Mr.deavers class

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  12. cool eggs and ham:Adolfo

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  13. Hey everybody your awsome.everyone ROCK'S if we were in a band and we were in a compation of a Rock band we would win.We would beat other school's,real rock and roll bands.But were here to learn.everyone is smart we would win in a contest about smartness.You know why because all the teacher's have teached us a lot!!!!!! The teacher's,Princapl's,and the student's work really hard.every teacher does there best on teaching us.They do a GREAT job!!!!!!Everyone should be nice to each other.Stacey,Mr.Deaver's Class

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  14. Yes we have to do alot of work and we learn alot to win a contest so 4th graders we have alot of work to do.BY ISABEL

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    1. hi evrery one you guys are the best. Lets learn alot so we could be ready for the CST! It's an important test I know we could PASS THE CST!WERE #1. FROM STACEY IN MR. DEAVER'S CLASS

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